I love to feel some soft, sweet pleasures;
the touch of lips, the lovely glances
of delight. Now, as night returns
and all my dreams seem true, I feel
the heat of love within my soul
as I search for God among my thoughts.
And where is lust? She is there too,
waiting to be embraced by me
and fed her due, until satiated
I fall asleep amid my dreams.
Lena S. said:
I like this, but I would have used ‘desire’ instead of ‘lust’. Different connotation plus bonus consonance with ‘dreamy’.
Racer X said:
Thanks. Yes, “dreamy desire” does have a nice sound and connotation…